4 thoughts on “Ricochet

  1. This poem put me in mind of ‘To a Poor Old Woman’ by William Carlos Williams with the way the emphasis is placed on different sections of the refrain by the lineation and formatting. I really like how you accentuated that with the final lines, referring to the very ricochet you had already shown through your form. Much enjoyed and admired.

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